Topic: hey ladies...please rate my profile | |
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i need to know if i am doin it right....would you date me or start a long lasting relationship with me.....
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Well for a start,you are good looking,quite a long redundant profile description,sounded kind of desperate but still barable.. :) over all,its a good profile almost fairy tale like but good..
Good luck and i wish you all the very best in finding your other half. |
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tnx u so much...i wuz jus tryn 2 add all i cud...lol
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tnx u so much...i wuz jus tryn 2 add all i cud...lol u did a great job.. :-* |
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Hi, I just joined and i'm wondering if you could rate my profile girls?
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Wel Blakerj,you should have posted your very own topic firstly..apart from that,for a gurl like me,honesty is the best policy i think you described less but you were honest.i appreciate you for that..if you describe a lil more it'd be better.
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Hi, I just joined and i'm wondering if you could rate my profile girls? You'd do better posting your OWN TOPIC....bse,this is a topic to rate someone else,NOT YOU! |
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i need to know if i am doin it right....would you date me or start a long lasting relationship with me..... Oooh dear!!!! Ok,you went on too much about pleasing,pleasing,my lady,pleasing........ This might scare some girls away...might feel like you are trying too hard?! Its a good profile-you just need to make it sound real/that you are genuine in your search! Also,tell us about your everyday interests-i mean,aside from pleasing your woman... Tell us a bit about the kind/type of woman you seek... Otherwise,yes,you have a certain vibe,but you are cute though!! |
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Your profile looks good. The description portion of it needs some work. Use proper grammar and full words not text speak. I hope you find who/what your looking for.
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You're very attractive, but agree your description sounds a bit needy and desperate. You sounds like a great guy, but would let some of that be discovered instead of all out on paper.
Good luck :) |
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You're very attractive, but agree your description sounds a bit needy and desperate. You sounds like a great guy, but would let some of that be discovered instead of all out on paper. Good luck :) i agree totally! |
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tnx guys.... made a few changes...check it out and tell me if i still need to adjust stuff.....tnx.again
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tnx guys.... made a few changes...check it out and tell me if i still need to adjust stuff.....tnx.again Hi Ploco, Haaaaaaaaa, You sure you edited profile?? Am sorry,but it still feels,seems and sounds as it was when i read it the first time! Well,take your time.. Goodluck! |
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Firstly you are good looking, but your description is way too long and sounds desperate. Just write something short and precise. All the best
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i changed it up a lil more.....check it
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Hi Ploco,
I checked it out again.... You could try putting your intrests at the top-where intrests are! Cheers |
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