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Topic: The Frog - help me finish...
sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Fri 03/08/13 06:05 PM
(all these naval images....I'm beginning to think I was traumatized at birth...lol) There was a frog from the boglands who wished for the kiss of a princess he thought and he thought upon the log that he stood oft perhaps the lass would dare the mists just to kiss the lonely misfits one of which was he

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Fri 03/08/13 07:41 PM Edited by DaySinner on Fri 03/08/13 07:59 PM
sorry, nothing to add at this time. I just like it.

sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Fri 03/08/13 08:20 PM
sorry, nothing to add at this time. I just like it. thanks maybe it is just OK as is

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Fri 03/08/13 08:49 PM
he got a kiss from a princess that was wearing poisiness lipstick and he died the end lol

sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Fri 03/08/13 09:01 PM
he got a kiss from a princess that was wearing poisiness lipstick and he died the end lol OMG one of which was he she saunered on over said how are ya soldier the kiss was the last thng he saw

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Fri 03/08/13 09:20 PM
lmao

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Fri 03/08/13 10:18 PM
oh! but alas! maybe there is one who can revive the poor lifeless frog lol

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Fri 03/08/13 10:51 PM
then a wizard appeared and revived the frog that layed helplesly on this log and he gave him immortality as the frog thanked the wizard for his reward he begins his journey once more

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Sat 03/09/13 03:53 AM
but the frog was watching the wizard as he ( the frog) was hopping away and did not see the hungry snake with its mouth wide open just waiting for the frog to hop on in

sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Sat 03/09/13 07:32 AM
oh! but alas! maybe there is one who can revive the poor lifeless frog lol that would have to be Goofball. he's good at revivals being from the south and all

sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Sat 03/09/13 07:34 AM
then a wizard appeared and revived the frog that layed helplesly on this log and he gave him immortality as the frog thanked the wizard for his reward he begins his journey once more ummm no you are out of metre

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sat 03/09/13 12:16 PM
goofball from the south like it. the snake would surely die from poiseness lipstick surely and the frog had immortallity. let him live poor frog

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Sat 03/09/13 12:26 PM Edited by 4evababy on Sat 03/09/13 12:26 PM
so how does the frog avoid getting eaten by the snake?

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sat 03/09/13 03:03 PM
he got immortallity when the snake dies the frog waits then gets out from inside the snake when a hunter finds the snake takes him home to make a belt as his cutting it open the frog escapes into the wildernees

sweetestgirl11 Joined Fri 09/12/08 Posts: 30087	Sat 03/09/13 05:58 PM
goofball from the south like it. the snake would surely die from poiseness lipstick surely and the frog had immortallity. let him live poor frog Oh these bleeding heart sympathy types OK...here goes: the kiss was the last thing he saw of the princess for, lo and behold she turned into a frog ribbitt ribbitt ribbitt

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sat 03/09/13 08:06 PM Edited by DaySinner on Sat 03/09/13 08:14 PM
he got a kiss from a princess that was wearing poisiness lipstick and he died the end lol OMG one of which was he ??? that doesn't sound good she saunered on over said how are ya soldier the kiss was the last thng he saw And he died happily believing in true love.

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Sat 03/09/13 10:19 PM
as he was hopping through the wilderness he came across a man, the said "hey there lil frog where did you come from" abd the frog replied?

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sat 03/09/13 10:34 PM
ivehad a hectic day nothing but disasters today im hopping that tomorrow is a betterday for me. rebbit

rynn1962 Joined Mon 02/04/13 Posts: 143	Mon 03/11/13 10:33 AM
goofball from the south like it. the snake would surely die from poiseness lipstick surely and the frog had immortallity. let him live poor frog ah ha now i see the jpurney

4evababy Joined Tue 02/26/13 Posts: 9258	Mon 03/11/13 10:56 AM
the man told the frog he will take him home and look after him and the frog agreed unbeknownst to the frog the man was not who he seemed and....