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Topic: Forlorn
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Tue 03/05/13 11:55 AM
After staring at this poem for three weeks I realize it isn't going anywhere, so here it is for worse or worse. Forlorn You lead me on Hinting things to be Giving me the love I need to be free Laughing and smiling together We walk hand-in-hand Down the beach Our toes together in sand The idyllic life abruptly ends You say you will never ever love Put me in a box Where push comes to shove Why do you Play with my heart Don’t you know It’ll tear me apart

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Tue 03/05/13 12:54 PM
nothing wrong with that hippie,

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 03/05/13 12:56 PM
Tell me who lead you on Hippy and I'll kick their azz...

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 03/05/13 01:21 PM
liked it..

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 03/05/13 01:30 PM
After staring at this poem for three weeks I realize it isn't going anywhere, so here it is for worse or worse. Forlorn You lead me on Hinting things to be Giving me the love I need to be free Laughing and smiling together We walk hand-in-hand Down the beach Our toes together in sand The idyllic life abruptly ends You say you will never ever love Put me in a box Where push comes to shove Why do you Play with my heart Don’t you know It’ll tear me apart I like this write, hippie... sad ending though...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Tue 03/05/13 07:02 PM
Tell me who lead you on Hippy and I'll kick their azz... Ann, the last woman I loved.

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Tue 03/05/13 07:17 PM
I liked it. good write!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 03/05/13 07:45 PM
Tell me who lead you on Hippy and I'll kick their azz... Ann, the last woman I loved. I'll need her address

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Tue 03/05/13 08:19 PM Edited by KiK2me on Tue 03/05/13 08:20 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_5IVuN1N6-Y Sometimes we just have to move on ...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 03/06/13 04:48 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 03/06/13 05:28 AM


oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 03/06/13 07:06 AM
Thanks ladies and gents, but you should not encourage me!

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