Topic: "she"
teadipper's photo
Sat 03/02/13 10:03 PM
You can't love me

I don't even know who I am

You can't commit to me

even though you think you can

I am fragments of the person

that I used to be

Trying to grab hold of me is

like trying to grab all the leaves at

once on a tree

You might like the smile or

the laugh

But you will see a trail of

broken hearts because I did

not honor myself if you do the

math

So for now, it's better if you leave

me be

Because out there somewhere

is your perfect “she”

Winlei's photo
Sat 03/02/13 11:47 PM
Love it.... A girl who had a terrible past. A girl who find it hard to move on. A girl who has a trust issue. A girl who gave up her happiness just to see the one she loves, happy..... Am i correct with my interpretation?

no photo
Sun 03/03/13 07:09 AM

You can't love me

I don't even know who I am

You can't commit to me

even though you think you can

I am fragments of the person

that I used to be

Trying to grab hold of me is

like trying to grab all the leaves at

once on a tree

You might like the smile or

the laugh

But you will see a trail of

broken hearts because I did

not honor myself if you do the

math

So for now, it's better if you leave

me be

Because out there somewhere

is your perfect “she”


Brava Teri...This is deliciousflowers

Bekindtohorses's photo
Mon 03/04/13 04:28 AM
You well find yourself as we all have during our search for love. As we look outward into the souls of others we recognize what lies beneath our own soul. Love yourself and others will follow.
Nicely done.