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Broken heartache and sin
I wonder where do I begin looking for something I can not find all i need is peace in my heart So how did I get here? so full of anger and problems and fears wonder if anyone understands there is hope .. any place with mind broken by heartache and man so many pieces to put in place ever so hard to do it yourself .. show me your face to be yourself ... tears that fell, I will not cry again it's your arms I seek my friend can it really be do not we see any tears broken heart be no more... |
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The outcome of a broken heart is that it can always be mended if you want it to be...Nice write...
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 I'm sorry...Welcome to Mingle Ragnhild
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Familiar feelings to me. Peace in the heart, I desire this too.
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this poem is what many feel . becuse they have bee fell in love in the wrong people who have exploited
on their feelings , by either scam people, or been used for study: by pzykologi students,Therefore, I wrote this poem yes I Also know how that feels. |
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welcome...
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Thank you kc0003 you fine poem
i was in your profile an read it
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Ragnhild_
As for your most recent poem, ( I wonder where do I begin ) yes, you have touched upon something very meaningful. Ainjel, Leigh2154, DaySinner and kc0003 have expressed their appreciation better than I could ever - as to how nicely this work was written. I do thoroughly subscribe! Nice work, Ragnhild_. I think what you've written says a lot and strikes hard in the heart of those who would abuse a relationship. Good food for thought. Yep, generally speaking men can really screw up a woman's life. And vice versa for women. What a screwed up scenario life is, is it not? What a bunch of feckin' wankers we can all be at times. Anyway, well done, Dear. tommy boy / Ireland / Tues. March 5th, 2013 - 4:35 PM. ==== |
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yes tommy it is many people that have feel how hard it can be and the
Anger and despair, of how we can be treated that way. I hope many read and understand what damage they do I am pleased that you understood the poem and hearty thanks for your comment |
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thank you Leigh2154
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Welcome Ms !
May you find peace and comfort here Lots of nice folks in here And glad you could make it Write On and hope you have fun...
KiK |
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thank you for the comment KiK2me
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