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Topic: Premonition
Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 03/02/13 08:16 AM Edited by Up2Us on Sat 03/02/13 08:19 AM
Premonition The corridor lights flicker, darkness lunges. Blood spews out of school lockers. Thunder, and screams echo within the hallways!!!! Through the Graffiti the word Columbine drifts to the surface. Jolted back into lifes reality of a dream. She wakes in a cold sweet. Emily stays home the next morning..... .

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 03/02/13 08:34 AM
This one brought me shivers... such sad, sad memories...

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Sat 03/02/13 08:36 AM
So true and tragic It is a shame what some people and usually kids these days will do for "revenge" and attention Or maybe just to be bullies... Good point !

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 03/02/13 08:44 AM
Premonition The corridor lights flicker, darkness lunges. Blood spews out of school lockers. Thunder, and screams echo within the hallways!!!! Through the Graffiti the word Columbine drifts to the surface. Jolted back into lifes reality of a dream. She wakes in a cold sweet. Emily stays home the next morning..... . Scary good Ups .....You should write screen plays!!

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sat 03/02/13 10:29 AM
Thrilling, foreboding. When I think of the reality of it, amusement fades.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 03/04/13 10:25 AM
Yes a very tragic moment. I may do a series of these short writes.... Thanks for reading & commenting.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 03/04/13 02:20 PM

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