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oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 02/22/13 12:13 PM
Daddies Anger Throttling To where he Can’t breathe Then bashing And smashing Picking bone fragments From their lips Don’t abuse A daddy’s girl Daddies take exception Abuse at your peril Daughter make a choice A man who loved you ‘ere you were born Or a lousy abuser A boy who “loves” you with nothing but scorn Daddies may not Always be right But they will love you With all their might

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 02/22/13 12:25 PM
Daddies Anger Throttling To where he Can’t breathe Then bashing And smashing Picking bone fragments From their lips Don’t abuse A daddy’s girl Daddies take exception Abuse at your peril Daughter make a choice A man who loved you ‘ere you were born Or a lousy abuser A boy who “loves” you with nothing but scorn Daddies may not Always be right But they will love you With all their might This is how my dad was too.. he would fight any man that hurt any of his daughters... we lost him in 1990, he was just 51 yrs old... your write is very moving...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 02/22/13 01:55 PM
No matter how cruddy the write you always try to encourage me! I lost track in this one of what I wanted to impart.

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Fri 02/22/13 04:49 PM
Daddies Anger Throttling To where he Can’t breathe Then bashing And smashing Picking bone fragments From their lips Don’t abuse A daddy’s girl Daddies take exception Abuse at your peril Daughter make a choice A man who loved you ‘ere you were born Or a lousy abuser A boy who “loves” you with nothing but scorn Daddies may not Always be right But they will love you With all their might This makes me think of my own "daddy."

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 02/22/13 05:26 PM


oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 02/22/13 05:31 PM
Aw, thanks folks.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 02/23/13 01:32 AM
No matter how cruddy the write you always try to encourage me! I lost track in this one of what I wanted to impart. hippie... this is very clear to me... a man abuses your daughter you've got her back... and she's gotta choice... the abuser or you... simple... of course I see another way I could interpret it... but, I'm sticking with the literal not hypothetical this time... it's still an awesome message that gets straight to the point... and reminds me of how my dad loved and wanted to protect me... I miss him more than words could ever describe... and it feels good to remember him like this too..

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 02/23/13 02:41 AM
Daddies should always be protective of their children.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 02/23/13 04:20 AM
We all should protect God's children.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 02/23/13 04:22 AM
We all should protect God's children.

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sun 02/24/13 03:23 AM
a dad with big heart and a meaninful soul beautiful write

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 02/24/13 03:52 AM
Awesome write

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 02/24/13 05:17 AM
A daddy who loves his baby, a daughter blessed... ...

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Sun 02/24/13 06:17 AM
zactly why Texas has the "he just needed killin" law. very nice hippie..