Topic: ~ union
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Sat 02/16/13 08:11 PM
i will be earth
you the rain

you will be hammered iron
i will be the heart

i will be the bucket
you will be the well

you will be the bow
i will be the arrow

i will be the page
you will be the book

you will be the words
i will be the mouth

and we will have
conversation without words
and words without conversation

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Sun 02/17/13 12:24 AM
So tell me what i am thinking ?
{snicker}
I like union Ms !
flowerforyou
KiK

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Sun 02/17/13 01:45 AM
ooooohhh TB, this is unique and I love it... words without conversation... :heart: :heart:

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Sun 02/17/13 02:46 AM
a meeting of minds, so much talent on this site its an amazing :heart: flowers

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Sun 02/17/13 04:32 AM
flowers flowers flowers
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
flowers flowers flowers

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Sun 02/17/13 06:16 AM
That's really nice and very meaningful. Thank you.

tommy boy

PS: As for this piece, what struck me was at the end where ye say; "and we will have conversation without words
and words without conversation. " And where, " words without conversation is noted, ( just as a thought, " worlds without conversation." ?? ) Sounds unique and . . . catchy. Nice piece!!

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Sun 02/17/13 07:13 PM
KiK2Me....thankyou for readin'

AthenaRose2.....thankyou,i like it myself...

woznotwoz.....thankyou for reading my..'stuff'

tazzops...flowerforyou

irish.....thankyou...worlds without conversation....oughth to be another poem in itself....like the idea...you are a wordsmith,afterall.