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i will be earth
you the rain you will be hammered iron i will be the heart i will be the bucket you will be the well you will be the bow i will be the arrow i will be the page you will be the book you will be the words i will be the mouth and we will have conversation without words and words without conversation |
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So tell me what i am thinking ?
{snicker} I like union Ms ! KiK |
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ooooohhh TB, this is unique and I love it... words without conversation...
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a meeting of minds, so much talent on this site its an amazing
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That's really nice and very meaningful. Thank you.
tommy boy PS: As for this piece, what struck me was at the end where ye say; "and we will have conversation without words and words without conversation. " And where, " words without conversation is noted, ( just as a thought, " worlds without conversation." ?? ) Sounds unique and . . . catchy. Nice piece!! === |
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KiK2Me....thankyou for readin'
AthenaRose2.....thankyou,i like it myself... woznotwoz.....thankyou for reading my..'stuff' tazzops... irish.....thankyou...worlds without conversation....oughth to be another poem in itself....like the idea...you are a wordsmith,afterall. |
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