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| Topic: O' Friend, My Friend ( When Twilight Falls Near ) | |
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Feather my page Lean over my aging shoulders Damp your point in my small, black liquid pond Write my wrongs with your 'blue-rhapsody' Let your daylight spring forth Spread your light across my Vision . . . I shall reward you! Tommy Moran - Ireland - 2013 === |
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this piece is..elegant.
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thats beautiful sounds so gentle
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Thank ye so much, Cyn. I write what I feel, and always, nothing less. Appreciate your words of encouragement. As you do know they mean a lot to this wayfarer poet. You've struck me here inside.
Be well, friend of mine. tommy boy === |
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woznotwoz,
Truly, may I say the same for you? I like what you do. Won't be long, woznot, and we'll b hearing a lot more about you and your writing. All good! Thank ye now, kind Sir. Keep wrestling with the ways and means by which you may introduce cool breaks in your poetic lines. We'll find it, my friend. It's there!! It's all about common line structure. And you've got that wrapped up tightly. tommy boy === |
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=== Feather my page Lean over my aging shoulders Damp your point in my small, black liquid pond Write my wrongs with your 'blue-rhapsody' Let your daylight spring forth Spread your light across my Vision . . . I shall reward you! Tommy Moran - Ireland - 2013 === to sing your song in sweet melody how much pleasure it would bring to me as always tommy boy, your words inspire... 
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A stirring write, a perfect love letter sure to please...
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Tue 02/12/13 04:40 AM
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You really have a certain way with words. Love it :). Also, it mentions Ireland, and that's one of my favourite places.
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a graceful glide across paper, i just soaked that in! wonderful tommyboy!
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absolutely beautiful!
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you write beautifully Tommy
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