I’ll show you my love
will you show me yours
he asks in a quiet voice
his breath touches her neck
I’m faithfully yours always
it’s only you for me, my dear
I’m here to await your surrender
reject me and you neglect yourself
deny
deprive
why keep living a lie
there’s no shame in rescue
in the rescue of you
the world revolves around you
all the way around you girl
YOU ARE MY WORLD
you will always be mine
for this and every Valentine’s
take me
break me
make me
all about your world too
can’t you see
…
I LOVE YOU
…
It’s been me
and only me
from the very start
I would never let you get very far
never let you out of my sight
you will never escape my heart
don’t you get it yet
you’re in my head
it’s you
it’s me
always and forever
until we’re dead
…
we’ll not be separated
even then
together
our headstones will say
he took her with him
to his grave
for in their life
she was very brave
accepting his hand
loving this man
with no ulterior motive
she taught him how to live
how to love
how to forgive
now she will ever be all
and only his…

© Athena Rose

02/09/13

so much emotion.

that's what is so nice about fantasy... Sinner, you can go as deep, or keep it as superficial as you feel... thank you for reading and responding...

Jayzuz, AthenaRose, "I love You" is just so very moving. This touches me deeply. More, more. More! Both are very nice.

tommy boy

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Thanks tommy boy... your reaction means a lot.. I appreciate you reading me...

Splendid and breath taking! Wish i could meet with a gal that would love me that way...... Nice write,ms Athena!

thank you, Solace... maybe you will...