Topic: Finding the right music...
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Sat 02/09/13 06:26 AM
They close their eyes
envisioning when
alone and free that night
leads only to one end
together they’ll climb
to their mountain’s height
where all fear of falling
has been banished from sight

her face in his hands
his lips
to her lips
she never thought love
would be anything
like this

his gentle
but unyielding touch
caresses
undresses
unleashes
all wayward spirits
until he finds the music
in her heart
the only one
who can ignite
his inferno’s spark
and it’s they two
that can hear it
feel it
seize it
be it

the flow of his energy
then holds
and controls her
so firmly is she
in his grasp
he forces her to breathe
deeply
taking him inside her

they will never again
be free of each

they are their first

always
to hunger
forever
to thirst

are they charmed
are they cursed

are you him

am I her

© Athena Rose

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DaySinner's photo
Sat 02/09/13 10:47 PM
a beautiful vision. I especially like the beginning. flowerforyou

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Sun 02/10/13 12:15 AM

a beautiful vision. I especially like the beginning. flowerforyou


thank you, Sinner, it's nice to see you again...

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Sun 02/10/13 04:19 AM
* AthenaRose, this is yet another very beautiful piece. Well written with a general tempo and beat which shines through brightly. I notice your poetry tends to always use imaginative language, expressing your very deep inner feelings and ideas. Well done, my friend.

tommy boy

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Sun 02/10/13 04:23 AM

* AthenaRose, this is yet another very beautiful piece. Well written with a general tempo and beat which shines through brightly. I notice your poetry tends to always use imaginative language, expressing your very deep inner feelings and ideas. Well done, my friend.

tommy boy

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thank you for your interest in my creative efforts, tommy boy... and for looking close enough to see me...