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They close their eyes
envisioning when alone and free that night leads only to one end together they’ll climb to their mountain’s height where all fear of falling has been banished from sight … her face in his hands his lips to her lips she never thought love would be anything like this … his gentle but unyielding touch caresses undresses unleashes all wayward spirits until he finds the music in her heart the only one who can ignite his inferno’s spark and it’s they two that can hear it feel it seize it be it … the flow of his energy then holds and controls her so firmly is she in his grasp he forces her to breathe deeply taking him inside her … they will never again be free of each … they are their first … always to hunger forever to thirst … are they charmed are they cursed … are you him … am I her © Athena Rose ![]() ![]() |
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a beautiful vision. I especially like the beginning.
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a beautiful vision. I especially like the beginning. ![]() thank you, Sinner, it's nice to see you again... |
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* AthenaRose, this is yet another very beautiful piece. Well written with a general tempo and beat which shines through brightly. I notice your poetry tends to always use imaginative language, expressing your very deep inner feelings and ideas. Well done, my friend.
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* AthenaRose, this is yet another very beautiful piece. Well written with a general tempo and beat which shines through brightly. I notice your poetry tends to always use imaginative language, expressing your very deep inner feelings and ideas. Well done, my friend. tommy boy === thank you for your interest in my creative efforts, tommy boy... and for looking close enough to see me... |
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