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Topic: The Lighthouse
yellowrose10 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 52804	Sun 01/06/13 01:48 PM
A lighthouse will stand In the dark of night It shines in this time A beacon of light A compass for those Who are scared and alone For those in need It will guide you home ok I'm not much of a poet but thought I would try lol

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Sun 01/06/13 01:51 PM
I liked it ! Short but sweet... Write some MORE !

yellowrose10 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 52804	Sun 01/06/13 01:52 PM
Really? well thank you! I focus better when it's short and sweet lol.

JamesPollard Joined Tue 08/30/11 Posts: 24	Sun 01/06/13 01:56 PM
you did just fine. I thought it was great!!!!

yellowrose10 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 52804	Sun 01/06/13 01:59 PM
well thank you JamesPollard

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Sun 01/06/13 02:10 PM
I thought it was good!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 01/06/13 04:36 PM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 01/06/13 06:01 PM
Nice write....

yellowrose10 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 52804	Tue 01/08/13 06:53 AM
Thank you guys. It's not Keats, but at least it's not Dr Seuss either lol

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Tue 01/08/13 07:08 AM
Really nice liked the deep message that the lighthouse lights the path for the lonely and for those afraid of the dark...................keep writing more your writing was as beautiful as the Rose itself :)

AlanJamison Joined Mon 12/24/12 Posts: 21	Tue 01/08/13 07:34 AM
Very good. Clear and concise! Great job.

yellowrose10 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 52804	Tue 01/08/13 07:40 AM
Thank you Harsh and Alan.

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