Topic: MPD: Taking the Wheel,,,Fights with my innerman | |
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Poem By: Raymond Bundotich
Give me control; else I'll take it; Have a look, if you see a fool maybe you have me confused for a mirror I have no excuses I'm just a man; nothing, just a man I got a pile of regrets locked away in my closet and piles of skeletons to go with it Together, you get the bitter taste that's me; See I'm on a mission; a mission to rescue redemption before it's lost into oblivion I can see it in the horizon it's almost out of reach I have no time, it's now or never I can't afford even a second to play your little games of who's the bigger man between us It's alright, you are God if it's what you wanna be just give me control; |
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Poem By: Raymond Bundotich Give me control; else I'll take it; I have no excuses the bitter taste that's me; I have no time, it's now or never I can't afford even a second to play your little games It's alright, you are God if it's what you wanna be just give me control; Ray... I like this clever way you describe self acceptance... limits... and taking control ... it's what i see anyway... good write... |
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Edited by
Leigh2154
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Tue 12/25/12 02:43 AM
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Poem By: Raymond Bundotich Give me control; else I'll take it; Have a look, if you see a fool maybe you have me confused for a mirror I have no excuses I'm just a man; nothing, just a man I got a pile of regrets locked away in my closet and piles of skeletons to go with it Together, you get the bitter taste that's me; See I'm on a mission; a mission to rescue redemption before it's lost into oblivion I can see it in the horizon it's almost out of reach I have no time, it's now or never I can't afford even a second to play your little games of who's the bigger man between us It's alright, you are God if it's what you wanna be just give me control; Never complain, never explain...Good job... |
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no complains no excuses...hehe...i like. simple clear...very little words but very big words
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thanks Athena
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