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Topic: Fall
justmesingleman Joined Fri 12/21/12 Posts: 9	Sat 12/22/12 01:13 AM
I fall I fall away with tears I run run away with years I cry cry where noone hears I die to be brought around again though I can see, though I can see Leaving all the pain I can feel, I can feel all these changes in me.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 12/22/12 01:53 AM
I fall I run I cry I die to be brought around again Leaving all the pain I can feel, I can feel all these changes in me. I can see loss and revitalization... enjoyed your write, justme...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 12/22/12 05:11 AM


justmesingleman Joined Fri 12/21/12 Posts: 9	Sat 12/22/12 05:36 AM
It is I had fallen from life, and am reborn with a youthful vitality. Almost childlike wonderment. Thanks.

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 12/23/12 10:57 PM
Nice write. Welcome to mingle and the writing forum.

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