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Topic: I see
justmesingleman's photo
Fri 12/21/12 09:28 AM
I see through blue eyes
blue skies
telling lies
I hear through broken ears
the end is near
ending all your fears
I feel in shaking hands
all that bands
woman and man.
kc0003's photo
Fri 12/21/12 10:27 AM
welcome...drinker
justmesingleman's photo
Fri 12/21/12 02:11 PM
Thank you.
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Fri 12/21/12 02:55 PM

I see

I hear

I feel


Hello, justme, welcome to the writers forum... I like how you are using the senses to relay your verse... enjoy your stay here... and have fun on the boards... waving
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Fri 12/21/12 04:32 PM
drinker :thumbsup:
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Fri 12/21/12 10:54 PM
Nicely done, and welcome... waving
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Sat 12/22/12 01:10 AM
Thank you all.

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