Topic: One Lover too Many
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Mon 12/17/12 11:08 PM
One lover too gentle
One lover too rough
Both lovers love her
Neither can have her enough

One so softly whispers
Igniting her fiery blood
With his hot breath in her ear
He tells her it’s time to give up

One boldly approaches
Igniting her natural defense
His way warns her of danger
With him there is no pretense

Both have her cornered
Neither giving an inch
One takes her from the other
Her loyalty he’ll eventually win

:heart:Copyright©AthenaRose 12/17/12:heart:


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Tue 12/18/12 10:41 PM
nicely written. I think this one would do well as lyrics in music. Sort of a "torn between two lovers" type theme.flowerforyou

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Wed 12/19/12 02:41 AM
Aaahhhh, yes Sinner, you got the message.. :wink: thanks for reading and commenting...