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just because i didn’t tell you
what i couldn’t tell you doesn’t mean i didn’t mean it defenseless to the difference you drifted in senseless tides divided by uneven stares at odd hours i knew you before you knew yourself I knew you in the time it takes a vulture to understand road-kill your reflection in the heat waves spells you out sells you out so that i could buy in to you like a martyr without a cause an example for the defenseless with a scavengers veins and a tub filled with feathers i cared about you before you cared about anything lost child in an empty market leaving bread crumbs for carnivores blinded by indifference you drifted by your feet, guilty or not still have rhythm so dance i know you will will you ever know how long it took to trace those steps off the edge of this empty page |
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Very awesome..
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just because i didn’t tell you
what i couldn’t tell you doesn’t mean i didn’t mean it i knew you before you knew yourself I knew you your reflection sells you out so that i could buy in to you i cared about you before you cared about anything blinded by indifference you drifted by your feet, guilty or not still have rhythm so dance i know you will Welcome to the writer's forum, Ghost_Writer, I identify with your first post... to care so deeply for someone who doesn't realize we exist while holding in the feelings and watching them interact all around us can be a strangling feeling to me... This is my interpretation of the parts I related too. Thank you for sharing, and providing the opportunity to respond... |
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No clever remarks or comments Ghost...This took my breath away....Welcome, welcome!!
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very good writing ,please post some more ....
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Nice write welcome to mingle
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Nice flow....
Excellent write.... |
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