Topic: the experiment
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Thu 12/13/12 08:22 PM
just because i didn’t tell you
what i couldn’t tell you
doesn’t mean
i didn’t mean it

defenseless to the difference
you drifted in
senseless tides divided by
uneven stares at odd hours

i knew you
before you knew yourself
I knew you
in the time it takes
a vulture to understand
road-kill

your reflection
in the heat waves
spells you out
sells you out
so that i could buy in to you

like a martyr without a cause
an example for the defenseless
with a scavengers veins
and a tub filled with feathers

i cared about you
before you cared about anything
lost child in an empty market
leaving bread crumbs
for carnivores

blinded by indifference
you drifted by
your feet, guilty or not
still have rhythm

so dance
i know you will
will you ever know
how long it took
to trace those steps off the edge
of this empty page

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Thu 12/13/12 08:27 PM
Very awesome..

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Fri 12/14/12 07:25 AM
just because i didn’t tell you
what i couldn’t tell you
doesn’t mean
i didn’t mean it

i knew you
before you knew yourself
I knew you

your reflection
sells you out
so that i could buy in to you

i cared about you
before you cared about anything

blinded by indifference
you drifted by
your feet, guilty or not
still have rhythm

so dance
i know you will

Welcome to the writer's forum, Ghost_Writer, I identify with your first post... to care so deeply for someone who doesn't realize we exist while holding in the feelings and watching them interact all around us can be a strangling feeling to me...

This is my interpretation of the parts I related too. Thank you for sharing, and providing the opportunity to respond...



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Fri 12/14/12 07:54 AM
No clever remarks or comments Ghost...This took my breath away....Welcome, welcome!!flowers


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Sat 12/15/12 10:45 AM
tears very good writing ,please post some more ....

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Thu 12/20/12 11:21 PM
flowerforyou Nice write welcome to mingle

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Fri 12/21/12 03:24 AM
Nice flow.... glasses
Excellent write....smokin