Topic: WHOLE
flech11's photo
Tue 12/11/12 11:02 AM
if i streched across this great green
Earth
to find a soul of equal
worth
upon the twine where children
play
we laugh and smile away each
day
there is no greater feeling of
bliss
so overwhelming her touch her
kiss
if we ever find these shores run
dry
we fill them with tears of joy we
cry
the breathe of life cast and
sent
down the stream their affinity
went
through the valleys sewn with
srife
feeding the orchids rendered
life
up the vines and down the
roots
once trampled under heavy
boots

DaySinner's photo
Tue 12/11/12 11:13 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Tue 12/11/12 11:14 AM
this is really good all the way through. I liked this. good images and a thoughtful write.

no photo
Tue 12/11/12 12:01 PM
flech.. i'm truly impressed.. you have simplified this emotional journey in my mind.. it is enjoyable to follow.. flowerforyou