Topic: Better Off Dead
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Mon 12/10/12 10:13 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Mon 12/10/12 10:15 AM
Trusting my instincts
I followed you into the night
where you
first
declared affection
from a withering height…
Memories
our golden years
would to us be like Spring
together forever
enjoying what happiness
brings…
But now I lay anguished
an invisible knee
on my chest
there’s no love
in me
after you took
what he left…
How could you do this
you’ve broken my heart
with my feelings
all trampled
I’m falling apart…
My thoughts think
of nothing
with a resounding hole
in my head
where once played
our music
is heard silence
instead…
Pity
me
not
as I remain here
at rest
for with a love
like yours
I
would be
better
off
dead sad

Copyright © Athena Rose 12/10/12

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Mon 12/10/12 10:25 AM
hey nice thghts dear
love and respect

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Mon 12/10/12 10:41 AM
Hello Chandra, welcome to the writers forum... I appreciate your comments on my effort to create art. I'll be looking forward to reading you too.. here on the threads..

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Mon 12/10/12 11:31 AM
oh my god the guilt this inspires! i really felt it. :heart:

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Mon 12/10/12 12:08 PM
Guilt, huh? :heart: :wink: