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Edited by
AthenaRose2
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Mon 12/10/12 10:15 AM
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Trusting my instincts
I followed you into the night where you first declared affection from a withering height… Memories our golden years would to us be like Spring together forever enjoying what happiness brings… But now I lay anguished an invisible knee on my chest there’s no love in me after you took what he left… How could you do this you’ve broken my heart with my feelings all trampled I’m falling apart… My thoughts think of nothing with a resounding hole in my head where once played our music is heard silence instead… Pity me not as I remain here at rest for with a love like yours I would be better off dead Copyright © Athena Rose 12/10/12 |
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hey nice thghts dear
love and respect |
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Hello Chandra, welcome to the writers forum... I appreciate your comments on my effort to create art. I'll be looking forward to reading you too.. here on the threads..
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oh my god the guilt this inspires! i really felt it.
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Guilt, huh?
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