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Topic: END II
flech11 Joined Mon 06/04/12 Posts: 67	Sun 12/09/12 03:06 PM
in the end there will be a wave it will crash against our ignorant ways it will erode the laws of our rational certainty it will wash away our grip on reality the uni-verse will stop and shed a tear for once in our lives our future is clear when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn all that was us, you and me will be gone

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sun 12/09/12 03:55 PM
woah, this is way cool! excellent write. gives me a shiver! I like this kind of stuff. Judgement DAY! and yet the universe weeps a loss.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Mon 12/10/12 01:02 AM
Oh no.. Flech, I don't like the sadness in this one.. the ultimate loss.. for once in our lives our future is clear when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn all that was us, you and me will be gone... good write tho..

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Mon 12/10/12 04:37 AM
I've read all three new poems..and very impressed, for someone so young to be writing like this, you are definitely talented..keep posting,.Flech!

flech11 Joined Mon 06/04/12 Posts: 67	Tue 12/11/12 10:49 AM
remember the constant paradox of life my athenian for every end there is new beggining and the end of a concience cycle makes room for new ways of thinking the current human race must end if we are to evolve into a species of life mind truth and love and on that day may it ever come the universe will shed a tear of joy for we have found new home far away from suffering i also thought it would be the perfect time to release this one so close to dec 21st :S all the possibilitys for the new year :P

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Tue 12/11/12 11:01 AM
Hi flech.. nice to see you posting again.. this time my feeling for this piece rests more on its intensity..

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/11/12 11:02 AM
remember the constant paradox of life my athenian for every end there is new beggining and the end of a concience cycle makes room for new ways of thinking the current human race must end if we are to evolve into a species of life mind truth and love and on that day may it ever come the universe will shed a tear of joy for we have found new home far away from suffering i also thought it would be the perfect time to release this one so close to dec 21st :S all the possibilitys for the new year :P I liked I and II Fletch...

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