in the end there will be a wave
it will crash against our ignorant ways
it will erode the laws of our rational certainty
it will wash away our grip on reality
the uni-verse will stop and shed a tear
for once in our lives our future is clear
when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn
all that was us, you and me will be gone

woah, this is way cool! excellent write. gives me a shiver! I like this kind of stuff. Judgement DAY! and yet the universe weeps a loss.

Oh no.. Flech, I don't like the sadness in this one.. the ultimate loss.. for once in our lives our future is clear when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn all that was us, you and me will be gone... good write tho..

I've read all three new poems..and very impressed, for someone so young to be writing like this, you are definitely talented..keep posting,.Flech!

remember the constant paradox of life my athenian for every end there is new beggining and the end of a concience cycle makes room for new ways of thinking the current human race must end if we are to evolve into a species of life mind truth and love and on that day may it ever come the universe will shed a tear of joy for we have found new home far away from suffering i also thought it would be the perfect time to release this one so close to dec 21st :S all the possibilitys for the new year :P

Hi flech.. nice to see you posting again.. this time my feeling for this piece rests more on its intensity..

I liked I and II Fletch...