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in the end there will be a wave
it will crash against our ignorant ways it will erode the laws of our rational certainty it will wash away our grip on reality the uni-verse will stop and shed a tear for once in our lives our future is clear when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn all that was us, you and me will be gone |
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woah, this is way cool! excellent write. gives me a shiver! I like this kind of stuff. Judgement DAY! and yet the universe weeps a loss.
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Oh no.. Flech, I don't like the sadness in this one.. the ultimate loss.. for once in our lives our future is clear when the tide breaks and ascends a new dawn all that was us, you and me will be gone...
  good write tho.. 
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I've read all three new poems..and very impressed, for someone so young to be writing like this, you are definitely talented..keep posting,.Flech!
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remember the constant paradox of life my athenian for every end there is new beggining and the end of a concience cycle makes room for new ways of thinking the current human race must end if we are to evolve into a species of life mind truth and love and on that day may it ever come the universe will shed a tear of joy for we have found new home far away from suffering i also thought it would be the perfect time to release this one so close to dec 21st :S all the possibilitys for the new year :P
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Hi flech.. nice to see you posting again.. this time my feeling for this piece rests more on its intensity..
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remember the constant paradox of life my athenian for every end there is new beggining and the end of a concience cycle makes room for new ways of thinking the current human race must end if we are to evolve into a species of life mind truth and love and on that day may it ever come the universe will shed a tear of joy for we have found new home far away from suffering i also thought it would be the perfect time to release this one so close to dec 21st :S all the possibilitys for the new year :P
I liked I and II Fletch... 
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