Topic: The Talking Pine Tree | |
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Edited by
Benji1010
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Sat 12/08/12 03:28 AM
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I cannot walk and yet I live
In the forest free With all my friends, the shrubs and plants You see - I am a tree! A mighty pine, a gift from God A long long life I've had My cones I generate each year And yet I still feel sad For winter is a lonely time So lonely for a tree My friends are now all fast asleep But what is this I see? Two humans walking down the path Arm in arm, so kind They've come to see my forest friends And left their own behind They stop, look up and gaze at me I'm pleased to see them, too I wave my snowy boughs at them Through the wintry hue They smile and say kind words to me They have respect, that's clear And on a lonely winter's day A word can be so dear For words can be so comforting So gentle - and, to me They so respect the fact that I Am just a mighty tree But trees have feelings in their veins A gift from God above Trees can feel both hurt and pain And also they feel love And so farewell, my human friends Your visit was a boon I know you'll visit at some time Please come and see me soon! I wave my snowy boughs again The breeze it makes me sigh And as the evening star doth rise I hate to say "Goodbye" |
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Oh Benji... what a pleasant read... such fanciful depictions and so true..
They so respect the fact that I Am just a mighty tree But trees have feelings in their veins A gift from God above Trees can feel both hurt and pain And also they feel love ... I see this thru my inner child's mind, and fall in love with the concept as it carries me along.. so enjoyable.. |
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What a pleasure to read Thank You
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, AthenaRose. This is really appreciated.
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And thank you too, Smallpebble:I am so pleased you enjoyed it.
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sir take a bow , simply take a bow
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A whimsical piece drenched in profundity!!..Lovely!
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