Topic: the gift
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Tue 12/04/12 09:11 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Tue 12/04/12 09:49 AM
she was the girl with kaleidoscopic eyes
eyes she could focus into laser sharp diamonds
with the power to drive any man mad should he look into them
for she had the power to tear apart the subconsciousness
causing the very hells to spill fourth into one's mind.

a man's only recourse would be to run,
run quickly home and climb into bed
and try to dream it all away
but there is no escape
in the morning he would find that his home
had transmuted into a determinating a mental ward
with a scant staff, preoccupied with the dangerous ones
phones all broken, no way to call out or get out
his possessions, his personality, and his very life stripped away

her gift was a terrible weapon. and she was still only a child.

(yes, i'm working with Athena on domination)

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Tue 12/04/12 09:56 AM
My goodness, Sinner, I like the feel of desperation in this piece… this childlike girl with such power to completely destroy you sounds like a virgin witch in the making… just saying.. :angel:

DaySinner's photo
Tue 12/04/12 11:07 AM
Edited by DaySinner on Tue 12/04/12 11:22 AM
oops! "determinating a mental ward" was supposed to be "deteriorating mental ward"

strange thing. I went to bed very happy last night but then I had nightmares. So I decided to post something.

tell me more about this "virgin witch" :)

I imagine she has the power to heal, to delight, or to make men go mad.
As an adult she has to power to satiate a man's most lavish desires.