Topic: Legends of the Hood
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Sat 11/24/12 10:40 PM
Your mouth on mine, breathing in, breathing out
Restless together bodies twist and tongues devour
Your spirit fills my lungs, flowing ice into my veins
Every ounce of your power goes straight to my brain
Tempt me; take me, your very words make me crazy
Hung like rubies on my neck your weight crushes me
Clenched tight, trembling, no controlling the inner self
There’s no one to rescue me, no where to run for help
Facial tensions mount your body’s rigid expression
Feeding frenzied hunger is your deep, dark obsession
In the midnight hours we become legends of the hood
As disobedient children intent on being misunderstood
Time won’t stop walls between us crumbling, eyes close
Climbing higher, faster, longer, swinging from the rope
Destiny’s last dream is a force we fiercely manipulate
Always together, throughout whatever, unto the grave

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Sat 11/24/12 11:03 PM
Nice flow on ur poetry

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Sun 11/25/12 05:38 AM
Thank you for commenting on my work, Superhero, cool nic-name u got there..

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Sun 11/25/12 06:37 AM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 11/25/12 04:11 PM
Thank you, Jeff.. :)