Topic: Red on White
FearandLoathing's photo
Fri 11/16/12 07:58 PM
I am a masochist,
This explains why I torture myself.

I am self-deprecating,
Which further illustrates my failure.

I am an artist,
This is how I built my glass house.

Four walls, four corners,
Four depreciated memoirs.

Four sides, four faces,
Four separate stories.

With blood upon these walls,
I will sit here, sit here and scream.

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Mon 11/19/12 05:07 PM
like the structure of this one,& the dark

FearandLoathing's photo
Tue 12/18/12 05:43 PM
Dear God...I missed one of my fans, my apologies, teasing.

The structure was me just messing around with different line counts...The darkness is merely natural. I'm glad you liked it; as always, I am indebted to your continued support.

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Tue 12/18/12 05:52 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

DaySinner's photo
Tue 12/18/12 10:26 PM
wow i really like this one.
I like every line.

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Tue 12/18/12 10:44 PM
torture, I agree.. that's what it evokes in me.. love your work, FaL...flowerforyou

FearandLoathing's photo
Thu 12/20/12 06:00 AM
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it...Like the view into a soul burning from the inside out, assuming a soul exists, of course.

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Thu 12/20/12 07:01 AM
This is REALLY poignant. Great minimalism. Great piece.