Topic: My Poems
lwturkjr's photo
Thu 11/15/12 08:38 PM
Something I'm actually kinda good at lets find out for real I guess.

I'll post some of my poems I've done here and see how it goes.


I spent my time just dreaming
Moving on searching for a better life
Seen enough sorrow to last all my days

Running through time
My vision never ending
The path ever holding

How am I suppose to know
Where this road called life will go?
Do I have to make the journey on my own?

As I grew up, reality childhood had to end
Funny how those years seemed so long but passed on by
Why do my memories resemble someone else's life?
Grey is the sky cold is the wind.
How is this journey going to end?

thewaterbearer's photo
Thu 11/15/12 09:29 PM
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Thu 11/15/12 10:52 PM
Nice write...smokin

Welcome to poems & creative writing waving

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Fri 11/16/12 06:29 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 11/16/12 12:09 PM
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lwturkjr's photo
Thu 02/14/13 05:40 PM
I posted this planning on posting more poems to it here is another one a bit lengthy, but I think it tells a good story, Although It could probably be more than one poem. Anyway hope you enjoy.

I cannot see with these eyes
The destiny of all galaxies
Gazing into the eye of the universe
The future's looking bleak
I know the time is near

Lords of the darkness
Blood is staining peace
Skies brightened up by the fire
War's knocking at every door
And the mankind craves for war
They want us to fear and they want us to crawl
But they forgot we are not crawlers


The scene for us was set
Towards the battle we go side by side
Revenge returns to us, this returns to me
Nothing matters on the battlefield we stand
Into the battle with power and might
And the horsemen shall come they will judge all your lives

Tired of the fighting destroying our world
We all travel light and space
Far out to galaxies unknown
To find the answer to the question
Save the human race.

A dark sphere surrounds us
A hidden force has found us
I hear screams of fallen souls, sad cries of agony
Present and future have no difference

Out of the night and into a vortex of fire
And out of nowhere we materialize
We folded space to a distant sun
When we made the journey here

Reality itself twists and bends.
Light years away, beyond our Galaxy
I see a planet like our own
A brilliant display, quenching my deepest desires
We stand before the dawn of a new world

woznotwoz's photo
Fri 02/15/13 05:49 AM
good write, drinker

Givemyheart2U's photo
Fri 02/15/13 09:53 AM
Great Work! happy

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