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Topic: You saved me
Hope4peace's photo
Mon 08/06/07 04:58 PM

I was
hurting
inside---
(chores)

ooo,ooo

I felt
like
falling---
for so
long
(chores)

You saved me---
ooo--
You saved me---
(bridge)

I was
dying
inside
for so
long
(chores)

ooo,dying
inside

I fell so
far and
so hard
(chores)

ooo,fell so
hard
(repeat chores 2x)

but then
you came
and saved
me---

ooo,You
saved me---
(fading)

theshotgunrule's photo
Mon 08/06/07 05:05 PM
chorus. :D
no photo
Mon 08/06/07 05:11 PM
noway OK, to read these words and hear your voice, was to say to you. CHORUS: You almost saved me. But im still falling.lol
Nice song...:wink: :heart:

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