Topic: Vulnerable
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Sat 10/13/12 04:32 PM
Edited by DarkHour on Sat 10/13/12 04:40 PM
We come into this world vulnerable, naked and alone.
We walk through life of endless dreams,
pretending we drink from youthful springs.
We’ve flown with eagles and seen the heights.
We’ve fought with the devil and won the fights.
We done it all and did all for what,
when tomorrow we’ll be all alone and all this gone.


Though one thing will change,
We’ll have our best treads on,
looking like brides and grooms,
still vulnerable and alone
when we leave this god forsaken world.smile2

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Sat 10/13/12 04:47 PM
:thumbsup: drinker smokin

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Sat 10/13/12 04:51 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 10/13/12 07:02 PM
Thanks guys for the acknowledgment :smile:

Much of this stuff I wrote many years ago while practising artistic elegance of poetic writing.
flowers

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Sat 10/13/12 08:37 PM
Nice write..