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Topic: ~ pink tissue paper
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 10/13/12 06:37 AM
my heart needs to be wrapped in more than this pink tissue paper i sometimes think the tinman had it right please make me a chastity belt for my heart,i'll swallow the key my heart needs to be wrapped in more than this pink tissue paper put my tenderness behind bars,sentry to shoot on contact armour plated,deflects arrows my heart needs to be wrapped in more than this pink tissue paper

DarkHour Joined Sun 09/19/10 Posts: 90	Sat 10/13/12 08:11 AM
I like the concept and the feeling you put behind it.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 10/13/12 08:40 AM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 10/13/12 04:44 PM
Awesome write....

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 10/13/12 08:59 PM
"Love" ..

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sat 10/13/12 11:36 PM
Beautiful write TB

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 10/14/12 06:24 AM
Darkhour...& you helped...smile tazzops.. Up2Us....like the heart Ainjel...aww.thankyou penny281...sweet,thankyou

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sun 10/14/12 09:07 PM
Another lovely write. I especially loved this line - "please make me a chastity belt for my heart,i'll swallow the key" I'm so happy you share your writing.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 10/15/12 05:12 AM
plastic_pancakes.....me too...& i'm always pleased to see you read & write me...

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