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Topic: U Dont Say..
Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 10/10/12 03:36 PM Edited by Simonedemidova on Wed 10/10/12 03:37 PM
Don't tell me you're wild and free The sun is high like your words That burn me Your life is so easy you say Nothing bothers you? Your words are as dull as the moon is grey Please do not be a tease Your mood swings like a pendulum Like the branches on the Trees Your lips like honey words like razors You're falling falling slowly UN-noticeable but who is here waiting waiting For a conclusion that never comes And it all ends abruptly...just like this poem

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 10/10/12 05:31 PM


Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 10/10/12 05:41 PM
Thanks.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 10/10/12 05:45 PM
, Welcomed, thank you for your words.

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 10/10/12 05:50 PM
They are more powerful in my head than they are on paper. I dont write as much poetry as I did in my youth.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 10/10/12 05:51 PM
Maybe you should do more writing. I would indeed read them.

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Thu 10/11/12 08:54 AM
Awesome write . .you should definitely write more.

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Fri 10/12/12 04:29 PM
Thank you

RenaissanceChick Joined Tue 10/09/12 Posts: 3	Sat 10/13/12 06:00 PM
Love the ending

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Sat 10/13/12 07:47 PM
Thanks Ren, that's my favorite part as well.

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