Topic: ETERNAL
flech11's photo
Thu 10/04/12 10:30 AM
within a day the sun will fall
the moon will rise above the ocean
when the darkness covers all
light surrenders all devotion
within a week tides will part
bringing breathe warmth and life
unhindered grants within the heart
shield thy home from hate and strife
within a month a forest burns
the sky is painted red with fire
out of ash a moth returns
ascending higher he will transpire
within a year ive come to find
what ive become is far to shallow
a distant word seems to kind
and will remain for nights to follow
within the second i have become
entranced by a lonesome smile
take me back to where im from
holding tight to stay the while
every minute i quake and tremble
for a life far less dismal
there you go at ease and nimble
relieving the world of days abysmal

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Thu 10/04/12 10:45 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

SimplicityAtItsBest's photo
Thu 10/04/12 10:59 AM
flowerforyou

Simonedemidova's photo
Thu 10/04/12 12:26 PM
Very beautiful and nice add of the natural elements.flowerforyou

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Thu 10/04/12 01:51 PM
Edited by Leigh2154 on Thu 10/04/12 01:51 PM

Tasty and satisfying, especially this..."there you go at ease and nimble relieving the world of days abysmal" flowerforyou