Topic: Thoughts
MrLovebug's photo
Mon 09/24/12 12:42 AM
Thoughts...

I thought that I'd seen beauty
I thought I'd witnessed grace,
I thought that I'd known love
'Til I gazed upon your face.

I thought I'd felt my heart beat
I thought my knees were weak,
I thought I'd heard a songbird
Until I heard you speak.

I thought the rose was fragrant
I thought the sky was blue,
I thought nature wonderful
'Til I first laid eyes on you.

I thought the sun was shining
I thought I'd seen it all,
I thought that I was standing
Until you made me fall.

I thought my eyes were open
Yet now I'm not so sure,
I think that I may be in love
Like I've never loved before.

I'll hold on to these feelings
And keep them safe within,
Until the time they're needed
And true love can begin...

ShugahBee's photo
Mon 09/24/12 12:53 AM
That was very good
excellent i liked
your poem it was very
good to read hope to
read more one day
flowerforyou biggrin

Kaleijoscope's photo
Mon 09/24/12 02:36 AM
Truly bitten by a lovebug...very good and can relate easily.,welcome to creative writing!