Topic: If I Don't Move...
sevin30's photo
Thu 09/13/12 09:08 PM
I'm not Miserable,
Just different.
No need to worry yourself,
I'm Insignificant.
I won't get in your way
Or
Cause you trouble,
I'll stay to myself
& hide in my bubble.
I'm not chosen to play games,
It's okay.
No, Really it's cool,
I'd rather read books anyway.
I don't want to fight you, My non-violence is consistent.
I'm afraid I'll only burden you
So let's pretend to be non-existent.
Your standing in my space
So I'll step back & walk away,
PLEASE, you beat me up last night,
I don't want any more bruises today!
No, I won't tell,
I'll keep it between us,
Yes I know you can kick my ***
Only don't do that please, just...
OW! Your hurting me,
Why are you doing this,
Get off my arm STOP!
Your Bruising it!
I'm not Miserable,
Just different.
No need to worry yourself,
I'm Insignificant!

pennyg281's photo
Fri 09/14/12 05:20 AM
Very intense I really liked it. :)flowerforyou

Kaleijoscope's photo
Fri 09/14/12 05:45 AM
it envokes strong emotions from within...it leaves me thinking...

sevin30's photo
Fri 09/14/12 05:52 AM
When I wrote this I kinda had in mind the people (children & women AND men) who have been in abusive relationships, bullied in schools and the people who are thought less of, I wanted to try and give them a voice

Kaleijoscope's photo
Fri 09/14/12 06:05 AM
that..and the song "luca" came to mind..you write it so real...

no photo
Fri 09/14/12 06:33 AM

When I wrote this I kinda had in mind the people (children & women AND men) who have been in abusive relationships, bullied in schools and the people who are thought less of, I wanted to try and give them a voice


Sevin!..How good this is!...How strong and original...And sadly, how true...Welcome to Mingle!flowerforyou

sevin30's photo
Fri 09/14/12 06:42 AM
Thank You,um, I have a couple a poems I'd like to post.
They are slightly different than some of the ones that I have already posted, but I feel they are equally as strong so I hope you all enjoy them as much as I enjoy writing them :)

tayah12's photo
Fri 09/14/12 07:23 AM
:smile: very nice