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I'm not Miserable,
Just different. No need to worry yourself, I'm Insignificant. I won't get in your way Or Cause you trouble, I'll stay to myself & hide in my bubble. I'm not chosen to play games, It's okay. No, Really it's cool, I'd rather read books anyway. I don't want to fight you, My non-violence is consistent. I'm afraid I'll only burden you So let's pretend to be non-existent. Your standing in my space So I'll step back & walk away, PLEASE, you beat me up last night, I don't want any more bruises today! No, I won't tell, I'll keep it between us, Yes I know you can kick my *** Only don't do that please, just... OW! Your hurting me, Why are you doing this, Get off my arm STOP! Your Bruising it! I'm not Miserable, Just different. No need to worry yourself, I'm Insignificant! |
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Very intense I really liked it. :)
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it envokes strong emotions from within...it leaves me thinking...
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When I wrote this I kinda had in mind the people (children & women AND men) who have been in abusive relationships, bullied in schools and the people who are thought less of, I wanted to try and give them a voice
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that..and the song "luca" came to mind..you write it so real...
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When I wrote this I kinda had in mind the people (children & women AND men) who have been in abusive relationships, bullied in schools and the people who are thought less of, I wanted to try and give them a voice Sevin!..How good this is!...How strong and original...And sadly, how true...Welcome to Mingle! |
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Thank You,um, I have a couple a poems I'd like to post.
They are slightly different than some of the ones that I have already posted, but I feel they are equally as strong so I hope you all enjoy them as much as I enjoy writing them :) |
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very nice
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