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The dead of night wrestled my eyes
My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years |
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i find this sensual...
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Beautiful
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very nice one my friend you really are amazing at writing :)
As i lay awake alone in bed and saw the sparkling stars in the sky i longed for your presence even more and my pain became more sore i wish nothing but your presence i count thy steps in the air even the wind brings me your sweet fragrance as i sleep in bed longing for your presence more :) |
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Tue 09/11/12 11:35 AM
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very nice
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very nice one my friend you really are amazing at writing :) As i lay awake alone in bed and saw the sparkling stars in the sky i longed for your presence even more and my pain became more sore i wish nothing but your presence i count thy steps in the air even the wind brings me your sweet fragrance as i sleep in bed longing for your presence more :) Post post post, |
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Nice. What a visual ~
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hehe i think we should all unite ans write a poem we can make an interesting team :)
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i am sorry my friend Poppashroom but i get inspired whenever you write and words start coming from my heart but when i sit alone and think i feel nervous whether its good or not and i get confused :(
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very nice one my friend you really are amazing at writing :) As i lay awake alone in bed and saw the sparkling stars in the sky i longed for your presence even more and my pain became more sore i wish nothing but your presence i count thy steps in the air even the wind brings me your sweet fragrance as i sleep in bed longing for your presence more :) I woke to brilliant blue The moon a ghost in the sky Whisps of lace like beauty A tear drop in my eye The Sun beats me But I won't let it beat me Your my ghost My eyes flood just cry's I hold your hand Hug where you stand Refuse for others impose My heart is your friend A life short lived Please grace me forward Support and forgive |
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felt the ripple...
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Tue 09/11/12 11:59 AM
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The dead of night wrestled my eyes My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years This is exquisit and i agree with teasing rippple it was past visual you should consider doing a book.
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Thank you all
TB always your gracious 2kids obliged as ever Harsh post my friend and grateful for you Sh |
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Edited by
harsh2019
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Tue 09/11/12 12:05 PM
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I beg for your forgiveness
as its the only thing that ties my soul to this wretched place i waited long for you but u nvr came i lived to die everyday and now im nothing but a wandering soul wishing nothing but forgiveness and only the bond we shared keeps my hopes alive i look for nothing but forgiveness embrace me once forgive me once and let me die in your arms all i ask is for your forgiveness how is it if it is good it is because of our friend and if its bad then its bad bcoz of me . |
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Thank you all TB always your gracious 2kids obliged as ever Harsh post my friend and grateful for you Sh |
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The dead of night wrestled my eyes My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years sad,hauntingly so. *hugs* |
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The dead of night wrestled my eyes My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years sad,hauntingly so. *hugs* x
Thank you my friend, 9/11 having a strange effect on me. |
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Oh wow..Loved it..
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it amazes me how your words are so captivating in such a compact write! its kineisthic from the very first line!
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<>¤<> Heaven is becoming jealous.....there is a distinct possibility that I am beginning to worship your poetical gift <>¤<>
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