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Topic: first kiss
ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Mon 10/16/06 04:13 PM
nervous, shaking trembling with anticipation your lips touch mine my heart skips oh the touch of your lips burning like fire sweet as chocolate soft as roses oh so gentle as if you're afriad i will disappear you gently brush my cheek with you fingertips pushing my hair back a first kiss,seemingly eternal nervous,shaking trembling with anticipation your lips touch mine.

hosstin18 Joined Mon 08/07/06 Posts: 445	Mon 10/16/06 04:18 PM
wow if i had to write about a frist kiss this woul dbe it thanks for your poems poet

spay Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 3674	Mon 10/16/06 04:45 PM
OH HELL NO ! ! DO FAT CHICKS REALLY GET KISSED?

ptjoker Joined Tue 10/10/06 Posts: 61	Mon 10/16/06 05:33 PM
shut up spay, she has the right to express herself. She sounds like a very romantic person that would be a wonderful person to be involved with.

ptjoker Joined Tue 10/10/06 Posts: 61	Mon 10/16/06 05:34 PM
Defently make me wish I could experience those lips. MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

cowboy112259 Joined Mon 10/16/06 Posts: 93	Mon 10/16/06 08:15 PM
I think it was a very nice poem and would like to read more of them,so keep them coming.

4fun06 Joined Sun 08/20/06 Posts: 4618	Mon 10/16/06 10:01 PM
keep it going!

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