Topic: Not all butterflies
Kahurangi's photo
Wed 09/05/12 05:06 PM
Or rainbows for that matter i'm afraid :-)


Go ahead, sit there, pretend the sincere
You know not the pain, with which i shed that tear
Suffering beyond your limited comprehension
You dare tell me insensitive, as your mention?

Go ahead, i’m curious, tell me your thoughts
I’ll spare you the details of the battles i’ve fought
You, who knows nothing of the footsteps i’ve trod
But by all means continue, you ridiculous clod

Go ahead, please do, I’m all ears
Enthral me, shower me, with your plastic fears
Feed off my pain, if that’s how you roll
Show that you care, like some bigoted troll

I’ve seen the masque, i know it’s deception
It’s twisted and gnarled
Underneath that perfection

ShugahBee's photo
Wed 09/05/12 05:43 PM
I liked this it reminds me
how i felt a time or two
i liked how u said roll
i have a habit of saying
roll with it .
very good poem it was nice to read it

Kahurangi's photo
Wed 09/05/12 09:01 PM
Thank you for the sentiment Shugah :smile:

Totage's photo
Wed 09/05/12 09:06 PM

Or rainbows for that matter i'm afraid :-)


Go ahead, sit there, pretend the sincere
You know not the pain, with which i shed that tear
Suffering beyond your limited comprehension
You dare tell me insensitive, as your mention?

Go ahead, i’m curious, tell me your thoughts
I’ll spare you the details of the battles i’ve fought
You, who knows nothing of the footsteps i’ve trod
But by all means continue, you ridiculous clod

Go ahead, please do, I’m all ears
Enthral me, shower me, with your plastic fears
Feed off my pain, if that’s how you roll
Show that you care, like some bigoted troll

I’ve seen the masque, i know it’s deception
It’s twisted and gnarled
Underneath that perfection




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Unfortunately for such a beautiful poem to be created, you had to be put through the pain.

no photo
Thu 09/06/12 06:58 AM
drinker flowers :thumbsup:

no photo
Thu 09/06/12 07:03 AM
flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 09/06/12 07:37 AM

Or rainbows for that matter i'm afraid :-)


Go ahead, sit there, pretend the sincere
You know not the pain, with which i shed that tear
Suffering beyond your limited comprehension
You dare tell me insensitive, as your mention?

Go ahead, i’m curious, tell me your thoughts
I’ll spare you the details of the battles i’ve fought
You, who knows nothing of the footsteps i’ve trod
But by all means continue, you ridiculous clod

Go ahead, please do, I’m all ears
Enthral me, shower me, with your plastic fears
Feed off my pain, if that’s how you roll
Show that you care, like some bigoted troll

I’ve seen the masque, i know it’s deception
It’s twisted and gnarled
Underneath that perfection



No window dressing necessary, love this!bigsmile

A quote from one of my favorite actors....

"I don`t believe in that phony hero stuff."
- Steve McQueen

poppashroom's photo
Thu 09/06/12 08:32 AM
This rolls of the page,
Thanks