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Hey guys, I have never been much of a writer, but I've decided to give it another shot after all of these years . So here goes nothing:
The constant bashing and blows to an ego you'll never become much more than what you are The constant slaughter of the one you want to be You are no more than a misfit among the pack a low rank wolf in the shadows of the alphas They will rip you apart if they see the true you Slowly the one-sided fight becomes an all-out war clashing egos struggling for higher power the inner demon scream its degrading words into your ear give up mortal, let the fear take over Mustering the last ounce of strength I have, I stand I stare into the eyes of the heartless monster and say no more For now I am no longer a slave to my inner fear But the battle is far from over as I know the flames of fear will appear once more |
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Welcome to creative writing!...You're off to a good start, stick around!
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Edited by
Smallblock_Ford2008
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Wed 08/29/12 08:29 PM
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Thank you Leigh...glad you liked it!
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I liked the fortitude shown in your poem. Brave, honest write ><>***
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Thanks. Just felt the urge to write and had to get it out on screen. I appreciate the comments. I might do it again...felt pretty relaxing doing this haha.
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You are no more than a misfit among the pack
I feel this.. I enjoyed this. |
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Creativity is always welcomed here. please continue to share.
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