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Topic: Ruby Red Tulips
tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Sun 08/19/12 08:25 PM Edited by tayah12 on Sun 08/19/12 08:28 PM
My beautiful tulips Once of ruby red From pot to our soil We whispered sprout roots May you grow Three springs you flourished Bloomed and brought joy Each spring Pitter patter Little feet once more The final two springs stormed More then before Each spring The suns rays Became further then before My beautiful tulips Once of ruby red Your gardeners have parted Untended Roots Dead

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 08/20/12 12:08 AM
where once there were tulips new blooms again red and brilliant gift of a friend

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Mon 08/20/12 12:25 AM
That is great I like that you do very well.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 08/20/12 06:36 AM


tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Mon 08/20/12 05:58 PM Edited by tayah12 on Mon 08/20/12 06:03 PM
Thank you for the ending I wanted to write it on an up note just could not find the words.

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 08/20/12 06:09 PM
very nice tayah, sad ending, so i enjoyed slowhands addition too :)

HeadnHeart Joined Wed 06/02/10 Posts: 1270	Mon 08/20/12 07:07 PM
From red to blue, I enjoyed the transition.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 08/21/12 07:45 AM Edited by s1owhand on Tue 08/21/12 07:46 AM
you have a lovely way with words i was not trying to finish or add to your work just was inspired to offer you some internet tulips to brighten your day i enjoyed your work and was inspired by it exactly as it was originally written looking forward to reading more from you here from time to time

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