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Topic: A love lost
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 08/12/12 05:28 PM
Love Lost The memories of your kiss Writhing it drapes across my lips As it departs with a sigh Leaving me alone and empty. What did I do To deserve this pain Of knowing in my heart Never to look in your eyes again. Your sweet embrace Is denied me now Your weightless ghost Parading in my arms. Another’s kisses Cannot wash the pain My heart is empty and Wanting you again.

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Sun 08/12/12 05:34 PM
Beautifull Poem I always enjoy reading what you write

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Sun 08/12/12 05:40 PM
Nice job

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 08/12/12 06:29 PM
Nice write....

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 08/12/12 06:34 PM
Nice write. :)

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 08/12/12 06:54 PM
Thank you, I scrapped it but a friend convinced me to post it....

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 08/12/12 07:02 PM
Thank you, I scrapped it but a friend convinced me to post it.... well I'm glad this one made the boards. :) I think most of do that. I'm my own worst critic I only post about a third of the stuff I write .

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 08/13/12 05:57 AM
You should run it through a friend like I do.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 08/13/12 06:01 AM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 08/13/12 03:38 PM
You should run it through a friend like I do. I thought the friend suggested looking ahead and not behind? Nostalgia is a heavy beast to bare.

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 08/13/12 07:14 PM
sad, the art of heart broken...

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