Topic: New... Rate me? | |
---|---|
Hello everyone. I just made an account, so I would like to know what you guys all rate my profile.
NOTE: I know my description is long, and I'm keeping it that way xD |
|
|
|
I think your profile is good. You state how you feel and why you feel that way and what you are seeking, all things personally I like to read in a profile and not have to make guesses about. I would keep all of that the way it is and not worry about any issues about length or anything.
I will say you might consider removing the last line about not having a choice, simply because it comes off more desperate sounding, and there are a great many who love to take advantage of that. You sound like an amazing and fascinating woman, so perhaps trade it out with something more confident or strong sounding. Just my thoughts there. Also, love the pic with the glasses. I always find glasses adorable. |
|
|