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Topic: Stone Cold
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 07/22/12 10:18 PM
Stone Cold There is a stirring Unfamiliar feeling Woken to strangeness Deep in the chest. Yet longing of lost memories Fluttering to the surface A light approacheth Cling to it in hopefulness. Sands of time have flowed So long empty and barren Parched and dehydrated A stone cold heart. With the stirrings And fluttering’s Is it time to wake A stone cold heart?

luvin53 Joined Fri 12/23/11 Posts: 243	Sun 07/22/12 10:55 PM
very insiteful. Can a cold heart be warmed.I think so.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 07/22/12 11:21 PM
The tombstone heart, beats off rigomortis mixed mortar. Winters elements crack, break the mould. Torrential tears flood the soiled foundation. Corrosive winds change chilled Deaths' dark clench, releasing the ice cold fingers & the heart beats once more

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 07/22/12 11:23 PM
The tombstone heart, beats off rigomortis mixed mortar. Winters elements crack, break the mould. Torrential tears flood the soiled foundation. Corrosive winds change chilled Deaths' dark clench, releasing the ice cold fingers & the heart beats once more Powerful poem.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 07/22/12 11:34 PM
From one friend to another

Sugarbeee Joined Sun 07/22/12 Posts: 15	Mon 07/23/12 12:14 AM
Stone Cold a very good poem i liked it alot very well said :)

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 07/23/12 11:25 AM
Thank you ladies.

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