Topic: the storm
jimz's photo
Mon 07/30/07 05:28 PM
when you come against the flagged sky
and the words formed by the clouds
sound in a silent thunder
I will wonder when I look into the dreamy sky
how far I can look inside
and will I see myself
too far into an universe
too deep from reality

ah, you say, love is broad
there are no names
no feelings
only some green paper
burning in some flame
lit by the darkness

where the sky
cries the tears
of weeping wives
and wives to be
watch their rain flood
a bottomless pit
so you could heal the first sin
you even made god
wonder where it went
the wind blowing your love somewhere
outside yourself
but I know your sky is under the void
of man's soul
where were you, "angel"
when I was born
because I already see you
watching my death
and if I live again
knowing you
I will only die again
too old for love to be eternal
and too young in my spirit
to escape your storm

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 07/31/07 09:56 AM
When you see the clouds gather in the sky above
My heart will thunder, cause I wonder
If you are watching me
and see the me hidden inside
this love a flame burning
through the darkness
of living this life without you
to sustain me
The rain falling upon my face
like tears in a thunderstorm
weeping because life has taken you away from me
Where once there was love
there is nothing left of "us"
and I wonder what turned my angel
into this cloud of dust
and my heart breaks even more
cause I know you are too far gone
from this world
to ever return to
the bliss
we once knew


(Jimz, just my way of saying, I understand...)
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