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Topic: Alone
CharlieEzra Joined Wed 06/13/12 Posts: 2	Wed 06/13/12 05:28 PM
Alone I sit upon this seat. The Moving Ground beneath my feet. Silence as I close my eyes, awoken by more silence. To a world that has since became, A quieter place, a darker place. Visions of you standing there, arise the awake and feel despair.

Kadicou Joined Thu 06/14/12 Posts: 3	Thu 06/14/12 01:40 PM
I would love that line to read: "awoken by some silent tears" ...instead of, what's there. A GREAT WORK STILL.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 06/14/12 01:43 PM
Alone I sit upon this seat. The Moving Ground beneath my feet. Silence as I close my eyes, awoken by more silence. To a world that has since became, A quieter place, a darker place. Visions of you standing there, arise the awake and feel despair. good read.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 06/15/12 09:04 AM
Alone I sit upon this seat. The Moving Ground beneath my feet. Silence as I close my eyes, awoken by more silence. To a world that has since became, A quieter place, a darker place. Visions of you standing there, arise the awake and feel despair.

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