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As I stand among the whispering tree's
Stare un-seeing at the fallen leaves Your voice echoes from so long before Before life closed you outside it's door Your words " it's only a bit of puff, i'll stop when i've had enough." The leaves they rustle with the sound Of raining leaves upon the ground You said " Mom it's just a bit of weed." Then soon followed a bit of speed Dont worry I can quit anytime Back then believing every line Too late you felt the needle push Seduced again by a sudden rush One day you knew it all to late The devils quest had sealed your fate " I love you," I shouted to un-hearing tree's " I miss you," the words are lost on a frozen breeze In this place seeking solace where there's none to be found Just your memories scattered with the leaves on the ground Ask yourself this as your life starts to drain Was it worth losin' Love for the rush and the pain |
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POWERFUL!
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Powerful,,, I hope to see more of your work, as I hope all will read this,,,
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Very Powerful Indeed. Great Poem!
Thanks for sharing... |
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Very very good, boondock!
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Thanks for the positive feedback.
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