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Topic: fooling yourself
insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 05/01/12 07:46 PM
You feel the world crash into the back of your head As you remember all the things that you have said, Your words shot like bullets with intent to kill Using every syllable with perfect skill, you emphasize Whatever point you want to make as long as your the one driving There will be no mistakes. let go of the reigns It's ok to be wrong The only one you've fooled is Yourself all along.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Tue 05/01/12 11:26 PM
Too true..Nice write..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 05/02/12 07:53 AM


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insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/02/12 11:35 AM
Too true..Nice write..

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/02/12 11:36 AM


insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/02/12 11:37 AM
thank u

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 05/06/12 04:17 AM
Nice write

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 05/06/12 06:22 AM


Dan3ple Joined Wed 04/25/12 Posts: 13	Sun 05/06/12 07:54 AM
I love this piece. It's educative and depicts what life stands to mean. Keep your poetic pot boiling.

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sun 05/06/12 02:15 PM
thanx everyone.

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