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Topic: Goodbye
Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Sun 04/29/12 10:06 PM
Silence as I hear your heart breaking Tears flow down your cheek like rain on the window And the pain makes it too hard to speak You said all that you have to say So I'll just walk away now

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Sun 04/29/12 11:48 PM
NOOOO!! I won't let you go! I'm kinda used to that cartoon face

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Sun 04/29/12 11:51 PM
Just ignore my TEARS..... they mean NOTHING!!!

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 04/30/12 12:01 AM
It's water color, and your tears washed the paint away. :(

eileena9 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 28211	Mon 04/30/12 12:13 AM
Silence as I hear your heart breaking Tears flow down your cheek like rain on the window And the pain makes it too hard to speak You said all that you have to say So I'll just walk away now {{{{{Totage}}}}}

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 04/30/12 12:18 AM
{{{eileena}}}

Tizar Joined Sat 04/28/12 Posts: 493	Mon 04/30/12 01:26 AM
Totage, listen to your lady friends, leaving is not the best idea. nice poem anyway :)

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Mon 04/30/12 01:40 AM
He's NOT leaving US.....We need him!!!

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 04/30/12 01:41 AM
I may leave a short while, but I always come back. :)

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Mon 04/30/12 02:16 AM
Very heartfelt poem . Do what's best for you. If you must leave,we will miss you. know you have friends always here for you.

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 04/30/12 02:20 AM
Not leaving here, not right now at least. lol

Kahurangi Joined Thu 04/26/12 Posts: 1970	Mon 04/30/12 04:11 AM
Silence as I hear your heart breaking Tears flow down your cheek like rain on the window And the pain makes it too hard to speak You said all that you have to say So I'll just walk away now Very inspiring piece...tis a pity you're leaving.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 04/30/12 05:36 AM


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