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being hurt so much. I have more poems but I don't know what ya'll think of them so here's one that someone may think isn't too bad.
"I am feeling a deep pain, pain is hard to explain. People call this pain Love. Love is a powerful thing. With love it means anything should be done to make that love grow. Even if it means you not being present in your love's life. Physically, mentally or spiritually. Love means you will do anything, thats what love is to me, and thats what I want to have and I will get it. Overcoming any obstacle no matter how high or how impossible, I will get it." |
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we all have been hurt more than once, as i feel this poem of your is expressing your most inner thoughts which is good. keep writing and letting out your emotions and thoughts.. thats the best way to go
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wow i didn't know you wrote poems but i liked that one, nicely said and true.
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Very nice K2.......I agree that we've all been hurt, but life goes on and eventually we find happiness again.
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thanks. I got more I just gotta type them into the pc.
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Nice |
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