Topic: poetry kissed me
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Sat 03/03/12 07:02 AM
This morning
poetry kissed me
on the forehead
as she stole 20 dollars
from my wallet and
drank the last of my wine,
then left the room.

When I woke up I saw
there was a note pinned
to the broken refrigerator
in the living room.

I cried as I read,
"I will never be enough for you,
so I'm leaving for a while and
I'm taking the booze with me.
Maybe you should move
closer to the ocean
and we'll try again."

Thank you, though, my love.
I guess it has been
more years
alone with you
than I want to admit anymore.

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Sat 03/03/12 07:10 AM
Nice...

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Sat 03/03/12 10:05 AM
I like it.

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Sat 03/03/12 07:28 PM
always enjoy the way the people in your writes just come to life. momentary inclusion. very nice plastic! :)

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Sat 03/03/12 09:00 PM
:cry: Gone,,leaving you once again,,alone..
Still,,finding a smile,,under your frown,,as
YOU now wear,,the only Crown...drinker
Great write man...:smile:

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Wed 03/07/12 07:03 AM
plastic_pancakes...like it alot...each stanza gets stronger......
teasingbrunette

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Sat 03/10/12 06:21 AM
What a story you tell. Always waiting to hear more....