Topic: -- Death----missing my late husband
mendy2's photo
Sun 02/26/12 08:17 PM
DEATH

WE THINK ABOUT YOU EVERYDAY
WE SEE YOU IN SOMEONES SMILE OR WAVE
WE SEE YOU IN ARE PHOTOGRAFES
IT MAKES US MISS YOUR LITTLE LAUGH
WE STOP AND THINK YOUR DEATH NOT REAL
I TRY SO HARD TO SMELL YOUR SMELL
I TRY TO THINK HOW YOUR SKIN DID FEEL
YOUR DEATH STILL DONT FEEL REALLY REAL
WE COMFORT EACH OTHER NIGHT AND DAY
IN HOPES ARE GREIF WILL GO AWAY
BUT THEN HERE GOES THOSES FEELING
ALL OVER AGAIN
YOUR LIFE WITH US WILL NEVER END
YOU'LL STAY RIGHT HERE IN ARE MINDS AND HEART'S
YOUR MEMORYS FROM US WILL NEVER DEPART
THESE ARE JUST THOUGHTS IAM HAVING OF YOU
I JUST THOUGHT ID WRITE DOWN A LINE OR TWO
I JUST REALLY LOVE AND MISS YOU
IAM JUST SAYING YOUR DEATH
FOR ME, WAS REALLY HARD TO GET THROUGH
BY CHARLOTTE--2004

AkaTrouble86's photo
Sun 02/26/12 08:26 PM
That is a great poem. i know what your going through all to well. hope things get better for you hun. god bless

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Sun 02/26/12 10:08 PM
:heart: Losing someone you love so much,,,,,,,is in thoughts here
speechless as for words to express,,But this write is deeply moving as to show,,,,the love so greatly missing now..:heart:

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Sun 02/26/12 10:10 PM
:heart: Losing someone you love so much,,,,,,,is in thoughts here
speechless as for words to express,,But this write is deeply moving as to show,,,,the love so greatly missing now..:heart:

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Mon 02/27/12 07:31 AM
(((Mendy)))

Your words are lovely. Putting your thoughts down on paper is probably therapeutic for you. Keep doing so.flowerforyou

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Mon 02/27/12 08:49 AM
Yes Iam putting all of my poetry in a bog in other site. My wish is to help others in there day to day life. thank you all for your kind words.

Ash36's photo
Mon 02/27/12 09:26 AM
Its Touching flowerforyou but death is somethin we cant deny.

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Mon 02/27/12 09:51 AM

Its Touching flowerforyou but death is somethin we cant deny.


We cannot deny death...true Ash...In the same respect, we cannot deny mourning the loss of a beloved....sorrow is real and must be dealt with...empathy for those in mourning is not a requirement, but it should be....

Beautiful poetry Mendy and I am sure others, like myself, who are in mourning will find comfort in your words....flowerforyou