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Topic: MORTAL COIL
willntheway Joined Thu 01/26/12 Posts: 31	Thu 02/23/12 05:19 PM
You brought down the house Where the floors shined and the windows were bright Removed the roof where the rain came through Stepped back and admired your amazing work ethic You move to do great things When you move at all Slipping off this All is within your grasp When you reach Slipping off this Don't think you know how short Your time is Slipping off this Have you seen enough to slip off this Have you felt enough To slip off this mortal coil X X

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 02/23/12 05:32 PM
welcome...

willntheway Joined Thu 01/26/12 Posts: 31	Thu 02/23/12 05:39 PM
HERE I AM NOW....AS I WAS BEFORE... (thank you)

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Thu 02/23/12 05:39 PM
cool!! i can hear this to music, welcome! :)

willntheway Joined Thu 01/26/12 Posts: 31	Thu 02/23/12 05:41 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 02/23/12 07:00 PM
ahhhhh it was will....something, yes?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 02/23/12 08:57 PM
I NEVER forget a face,,and YES,,,its will,,and co cool to see him back on,,,and this write here,,rocks my friend...re-coil some more,,

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 02/24/12 12:01 AM
nice write :)

willntheway Joined Thu 01/26/12 Posts: 31	Fri 02/24/12 02:06 PM
Thanks Penny Thanks Terry WILLNTHEWAY

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/24/12 02:17 PM
Don't know how I missed this yesterday, glad I found it today...Wonder how Hamlet would deal with 21st Century turmoil?...Nice write Will !!...

willntheway Joined Thu 01/26/12 Posts: 31	Fri 02/24/12 02:42 PM
He would rail against it and like don quixote he would fail but it would be brilliant to see him try.. I am overwhelmed that you would mention shakespeare in the same breath as my poem..Thank you madam..

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