Just a song I've been working on. Sounds a lot better, with a guitar. And someone with a smooth voice.

We work so long for the living.
We become the dead. We work
so long while the alive get
ahead.

Look at us now, dead
as can be. Nail the coffin
in, and let us be.

We work so long, work so
hard. We hardly get a chance
to live a again.

Started working at the
age of seventeen. Ready to
die, at the of age of sixty.
Got nothing to show,
except sore hands.
And a waste of life.

Call it (WAISTED lIFE) WOULD SOUND GOOD WITH A RASPY VOICE!

Thats what I was thinking(The voice)

Your voice!!!

I sing bad. Real bad.

Maybe I would like it. ???

Tom Waits! Good and raspy.